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Post by robin on Aug 1, 2006 14:31:45 GMT -5
Whatever, let's go, already!
mewed Spiderpaw impatiently. He just wanted to get home and get the medicine cat to look at his wounds.
ohh... I don't feel so good
Then he fainted from loss of blood.
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Post by .:.Teardrops.:. on Aug 1, 2006 14:44:08 GMT -5
Robinpaw, overcome with surprise, unsheathed her claws as Spiderpaw hit the ground. "StarClan!" She began to pad foreward, "Spiderpaw?"
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Post by robin on Aug 1, 2006 14:56:27 GMT -5
((Did you get my PM)) Robinpaw?
Spiderpaw asked as he opened one eye. He couldn't say anything else because he fainted again. He saw Stoneclan in his head. His eyes popped open.
Summerpaw ((His deceased sister)), Am I dead? Have you come to rescue me?
He was dying. If he didn't get help soon, he'd be dead for sure.
Hold on, Spiderpaw, Don't die. If you do, I'll be here waiting for you
Summerpaw spoke to him. But as suddenly as his eyes were open, they shut. He slipped into a coma.
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Post by --> arcticstripe <-- on Aug 1, 2006 15:03:05 GMT -5
[ No StarClan in this RPG, it's StoneClan ] The sound of Spiderpaw's voice again brought Arcticstripe to turn around. When she saw the young apprentice fall to the ground her eyes widened and a small gasp escaped her mouth.
She dashed to the apprentice and saw the few wounds that had been bleeding non-stop. She started to clean them, rasping her tongue over and over. When she thought she had done enough, he stood up straight and looked at Boulderpaw. With urgency in her voice, she gave him her orders.
Bring Spiderpaw back to camp. And Robinpaw,
She said, turning to the she-cat.
Go with them.Boulderpaw nodded and lifted the tom in his mouth. He tried to get him onto his back, but was having trouble. He had to have Arcticstripe come and push the apprentice all the way up. He nodded, gratefully and padded off along the stream. He definalty couldn't bring the cat through the water, and he knew there was a shallower place down stream. He quickly made his way, hoping Robinpaw was behind him.
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Post by robin on Aug 1, 2006 15:08:59 GMT -5
[What do you mean? I wrote Stoneclan.]
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Post by Tïny¤ on Aug 1, 2006 15:10:31 GMT -5
LIonpaw felt terrible. He nearly killed an apprentice..younger than him, for that matter. He shook his head, murmuring softly to himself.
Oh StoneClan, what have I done?
He felt his legs wobbling beneath him. It seemed as if they would give out any minute.
Oh, the heat..
Everything went black.
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Post by .:.Teardrops.:. on Aug 1, 2006 15:18:29 GMT -5
[oops, sorry!] Robinpaw nodded to the she-cat and followed Boulderpaw and Spiderpaw. She grasped the other side of Spiderpaw in her mouth, lifting weight off of Boulderpaw's side to create balance. [/color]
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Post by --> arcticstripe <-- on Aug 1, 2006 17:46:36 GMT -5
[ This was supposed to be simple. Short battle, the two meet and take the apprentices home. Oh, and I was talking to Teardrops, robin ;D] Brownpaw shot to her paws the instant she saw Lionpaw fall. She raced over to him and towered over his fainted form. He was still breathing. Two in one day? What was wrong?
Silentstorm!
Brownpaw called to try and get the deputies attention. She then bent her head over her friend again, waiting to see what would happen.
It would be hopless for her to try and carry Lionpaw on her back like the SpiderClan apprentice had done to the other one. She'd just collapse under Lionpaws weight. Silentstorm would have to carry him across his back and back to camp.Arcticstripe didn't notice the RockClan apprentice faint this time. It w time. It was only until the she-apprentice called Silentstorm's name urgently that she lookede over. She was surprised to see the tom down. Worry crept into her body, showing in her eyes and tail. There was obviously something already terribly wrong with RockClan, considering they had a new deputy. A fainted apprentice would only make the matters worse. The clan would worry about the sun, and sheild there cats from it. They would soon have their food scurry off their territory. Arcticstripe shivered, thinking of it.
Storm clouds threatend SpiderClan's territory, but they were not headed in RockClan's direction. The she-cat feared for the clan.
If the apprentice that had fainted had been in SpiderClan, Arcticstripe would have rushed to his side. He wasn't though, so the blue streaked she-cat stood helpless, only able to watch the scene.
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Post by robin on Aug 2, 2006 7:24:12 GMT -5
[ya, I know... But it's a great way to spice things up for Arcticstripe and Silentstorm,Don't you think?]
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Post by Tïny¤ on Aug 2, 2006 9:06:35 GMT -5
Thoughts swirled in Lionpaw's mind. He was dizzy, but all he could see was darkness. There was nothing...And yet, there was still something here. He could make out the distant shape of a cat, small, like he was. But, who in StoneClan's name could it be?
[I'm thinking that Lionpaw will die from being overheated. Just to stir things up a bit.]
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Post by robin on Aug 2, 2006 9:25:01 GMT -5
[cool. I've nothing more to say, but can Spiderpaw secretly like lionpaw as a friend? Then when he wakes up and finds out, he will be very upset]
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Post by Tïny¤ on Aug 2, 2006 9:35:44 GMT -5
[Okay. ] Lionpaw finally came close to the figure who was walking towards him. He squinted, olive eyes bright with curiosity. He began to recognize the shape of..
MOTHER!
He scrambled to his paws, now surrounded by other cats. His father, the previos RockClan deputy...They were all here. His head filled with curiosity.
Why am I here? Is this StoneClan?
He filled with panic. Lionpaw didn't want to die! He wanted to become a warrior, fall in love, see his friends again...
Let me go back!
His mother looked at him, sorrow in her eyes. She nodded, and he felt the images disappearing. He opened one eye, and saw Brownpaw standing over him. Did he really want to live?
Water...please...
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Post by --> arcticstripe <-- on Aug 2, 2006 11:56:48 GMT -5
Brownpaw nodded and tried to push Lionpaw to his paws. There was no way she could get water for him. The only way she could help was by pushing her friend to the water. She hoped he would get to her paws.
Arcticstripe watched as if she were floating above the scene. She wanted to help, but knew that she shouldn't. She desperatly wanted to go over and push the tom harder so that he could get to the water in time, but she stood where she was. Her feet planted on the ground standing stock still with her tail drooping along with her ears.
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Post by Tïny¤ on Aug 3, 2006 16:49:38 GMT -5
[You mean his paws ] Lionpaw stood weakly, a pain throbbing inside his head. He felt dizzy, but he could see the River just ahead. He wobbled towards it, drinking thirstily. His olive eyes swirled with pain, but it was easier now that he had water. He got up, licking his lips.
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Post by --> arcticstripe <-- on Aug 7, 2006 7:42:47 GMT -5
[ Yeah, whoops! I would change it, but 1) I'm to lazy, 2) I have other stuff to do around here before I have to go to soccer ]
Arcticstripe sighed when she saw the apprentice get up. She glanced at Silentstorm, he hadn't seemed to do anything. She tilted her head, looking at him. What was he playing at?
Brownpaw echoed Arcticstripes sigh and walked slowly with Lionpaw to the water, offering him support all the way. She smiled as he drank. She turned around and looked at Silentstorm. "Silentstorm, I think he can make it back with just my help. You can explain the her," she flicked her tail in the direction of Arcticstripe. "What happened to Russetstone."
Arcticstripe saw the sorrow that lit up in Brownpaw's eyes when she uttered her leaders name. Arcticstripe frantically looked from Brownpaw to Silentstorm, wanting an explanation.
Brownpaw dipped her head to Silentstorm, but didn't even glance at Arcticstripe. She softly spoke to Lionpaw, making sure he was ok, "Come on, we're going to go back to camp." She turned around at looked at Lionpaw making sure he'd be able to hobble back to the clan.
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